Sunday, December 6, 2009

Feedback on classmate's

Hello,
I will give you the feedack on the journal of Ahmed Saif
which is about the F1 race
Did you understand what the article was about from the summary?
Yes, it was a clear summary
Does it sound interesting to you as well? Why or why not?
No it didn't, because it is a quite old news
Are there any spelling, grammar or vocabulary mistakes that you noticed?
Yes there are some mistakes which are
it is happen in my country
* it is happened in my country
to talk about it also
*to talk about also

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